At Dusk I'Ll Rise Comments

An inspirational poem, written with conviction and insight to capture the essence of the piece. A well articulated piece with a powerful message - FAITH. FAITH KEEPS THOSE THAT KEEP THE FAITH - Mother Teresa. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

Compelling and enjoyable read. Well done!

I Love this poem! ! ! ! Its so expressive such feeling and pictures Good Job^^

I’ll continue flying Till I reach the oasis Where the luster sparked My intense emotions building up My feeling is sky hope to reach As I walked out and in I’ll forever rise............... i will rise with the rising of yellow sun with al high hopes disregarding what otheres did to me.. this is philosophy of life....you got to go alone andnever beafraid of what is happening to yu.. it is good sign also....10 read mine ....you go alone........go back......sun

First, I welcome you here. I agree with Mubeen and I think this is one of your finest, so far. You have a nice poettess hiding in you and she will reveal more of her creativity and talent in times to come. Good work.

Its a nice work. If you put some hardwork you'll get a good grip. Basically a good poetic feeling.

This poem is AMAZING! :) I really like it. Keep writing

lovely poem ill fly and fly and fly the sky is the limit -10 anjali (do read mine MY SMALL LITTLE SECRET)

you write beautiful words...simply enchanting...your poem speeks and unspoken story.....nice work :) 10++

The sky shall, know the breadth of your wings, the people will be as ants to your feet, from you they will ask for life, you will give them depth of heart and mind...iip

I’ll continue flying Till I reach the oasis Where the luster sparked My intense emotions building up My feeling is sky hope to reach As I walked out and in I’ll forever rise..................yeah u shall rise like a phoenix................a good write..........

Beautifully and exquisitely written.10++++

the flow fits perfectly.. and the poem..amazing

Yes my friend............you shall rise like phoenix.................Good Write

this one is amazing, yes, thankyou for pointing this one out.

nice writing.... thanks for bringing my attention to this... keep it up.

very similar to Maya's, 'Still I Still'.. You get your inspiration form good places..

it is nice poem friend khadija keep on writing hmmm :)

i know the feeling. i've had that feeling for more then five years now.and i realy like this poem!

Self belief is at issue here Khadija.We must be true to ourselves.Have to be strong in adversity.No matter how badly we are treated, keep our dignity and strength of will to succeed.Your poem describes determination and the will to come out on top no matter what..A great write Khadija..well done. Sid.