! ! At Days End Comments

Another cracker of a poem Bob! Ruthie :)

BOB, Your last para concludes this poem very effectively! In fact it is full of Zen Philosophy! Actor Richard Geare, the Buddhist, would also love to read this too! Thanks for sharing! 10 + -Raj

Bob, a wonderful image laden poem with a great calming effect to its reader. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. David

dear bob....i loved the way you describe the moon in this poem.i think all love the moon because of its gentleness, and soothing qualities, which has always intrigued the poets.i liked 'citrus segments, half way to whole'and the wonderful imagery! goes down as my favourite.best wishes. ritty

Sigh! This is simply glorious Bob. I loved the 'citrus segment' of the moon. You are a true artist and have painted such wonderful pictures in my mind. I hope that my mind won't be empty but filled with the images of your poem as I embrace a sleep of dreams. Top marks! Karin Anderson

I like this, it's like after a play when the curtin slowly closes, and everyone leaves. that is how i always think of sunsets, there the curtin to are days

This is a marvellous piece of work Bob and so soothing to read. It has wonderful imagery too. Best wishes, Andrew

I would give my right brain to be able to paint with words the way you do here. Your colors are so beautifully vivid.

life cycle also change as days near to end so is life... beautiful poem dear. u r at the height of carrier

Jim said it all (as always) and you have enchanted me (as always) . t x

Peaceful, natural and convincing images I find myself drawn to Mr Blackwell. A skilfully piece of poetic sketching which had a genuinely relaxing effect on this reader. A pleasure to read and contemplate. Thank you. jim (PS It was a much more leisurely and decent world too. We've lost a lot in the last few decades.)

'With no thoughts, it embraces a golden silence, that soothes and heals our still anxious, troubled World.' 10 for this moving composition.

'it embraces a golden silence, that soothes and heals our still anxious, troubled World'. your words seems to heal me sir..thanks..cheers10++

Beautifully descriptive, A tranquil observation of the moon taking centre stage as an empty mind embraces golden silence. I shall be visiting regularly

Such beautiful words! Let the shine of a divine light lifts our world from sorrow...10+++ MIMI

A beautiful poem, Bob. Really beautiful. Its imagery is so wonderful and the last stanza has real consolatory effects. Thanks for sharing and showing a glimpse of your senstive soul. Best Regards Naseer

Wonderful poem Bob! I saw that blood orange moon, arising last night darkness surrounded, an eerie glow, a captivating sight as it rose its color changed, yellow to silver bright the waters rippled in its glow, of that beautiful moonlight kindest regards Bob

Bob! It is a pleasure reading ur poems........so beautifully descriptive...

U have so nicely expressed the beauty of inner silence.....no amount of outer silence can match the beauty of tranquility inside....Gud write...God Bless: -)

Brilliant write Bob....enjoyed reading your poetry....10+++