! ! At Daybreak Comments

Loved the poetic language of this poem.. Rich in nature imagery, beautiful.; D

mmmmm, just like choccy pud and ice cream this poem, capturing nature at it's best.... Ruthie

dear bob.....excellent poem, morning scenario captured very well, couldn't have been better detailed. enjoyed every line of this poem.great write. ritty

Bob, I can only repeat what everyone has said before me. The beautiful images evoke a pristine picture in ones mind of a hot summer day and the unseen activities that goes on there almost unnoticed except by a keen observer. Ten plus from me my friend. David

Remarkable imagery.10++

amazing imagery, an amazing look at sunrise, and a very cute look at nature as it comes to life in the morning,

A breathtaking picture poem Bob, beautiful imagery to captivate ones mind. Best wishes, Andrew

Such an utterly beautiful and picturesque poem Bob. You took me to the daybreak of your poem and it reminded me of a CD I have of bird calls at daybreak in Australia. Your poem is a celebration of another day and 'the moth' and 'ants begin to march' for some reason captivated me. This poem can be read again and again and there will always be something new to discover. Top marks Karin

You begin with an 'anxious world' and end with the sun's bold salutation to the morning. I love the way use your moth - who finds himself in the wrong place at the wrong time - to provide a soft link from one stanza to the next. There is a feeling of suspension as your stanzas unfold - as if the reader is teetering on the brink of something that takes its time to unfold. A keenly observed description of a mystical time of day. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

soooo very beautiful...quite an artist...thanks for the refreshment 10+++

Beautifully written- feel I had awakened then drifted into a dream eyes wide open.. picture perfect from start to finish - thanks for this unfolding of daybreak...Cindy

Beautiful imageries you provide along with the rising sun there all through... pleasing write Bob...10

beauty of notes is really feeding your mind sir.great poem

I declare you as Knight of the Poetry World... amazing poem! ! 10++++ MIMI

A perfect poem bathed in beauty, freshness and music of Nature. A poem with Wordsworthian touch after a long time............excellent. CP

Beautiful descriptive poetry. Memorable piece indeed. You could by words, bring in the real feel of a day break.

Wonderful, you have used nice imagery.10+

The sun, the streams the robin the mimics at night all of them struggles to find a private place to rest. lovely poem certainly ++10 anjali