Monday, December 29, 2014

At Crossroads Comments

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At Crossroads
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Unknown is life
Unknown are its ways
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Amitava Sur 30 December 2014

A nice poem with thoughts behind with some cautions about the passage of life Might lead me not to my potential best.......... very true.

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Salini Nair 30 December 2014

One mistake in such a foggy path Might render life mute and crippled......................thoughtful write...really nice

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Valsa George 30 December 2014

A beautiful poem rich in meaning and perfect in diction! Enjoyed the lines One mistake in such a foggy path Might render life mute and crippled Any decision made with myself absent Might lead me not to my potential best................Each decision we make is crucial..... Equally important it is that each decision is taken with our own full consciousness and not compelled by others! A sure 10

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