Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Friday, April 10, 2009

At Cross Road Comments

Rating: 4.8

Never but at cross road,
Are we at cross road?
Is there any load?
Why not we meet?
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Nabakishore Dash. 19 August 2021

Excellent poem beautifully penned

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M Asim Nehal 16 June 2021

A wonderful poem on life's dilemma.5***

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 January 2021

Life is worth to live in, forget not but just be in....inspirational. A great poem sir.5 stars

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 January 2021

Added 5 Stars Full.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 January 2021

I am with Rajnish Sir, the same vision as he mentioned as his response. Magnificent significant message. Thank you so much for sharing last 9 April 2009 (WOW! What a time!) Best wishes, Sylvia Frances Chan, Dutch Poetess

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Rajnish Manga 08 July 2020

we will soon be extinct, Time is running out.... //.... It's a meaningful poem which takes note of everything that is going wrong but the man seems to be just indifferent or has resigned to what has been happening around. The poem holds a significant message for the world and how to reverse the trend. Thanks.

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Anjandev Roy 06 July 2020

This is magnificent write.....thank u. anjandev roy.

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Denis Mair 08 July 2019

We really seem to be at the mother of all crossroads during this era. Every step taken is fateful for humanity, but this is also a stage of many distractions. Your poem brings our attention front and center, , , to our encounter with fate.

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 24 June 2018

Absolutely amazing poem....10+++ Thanks for sharing an expensive piece of writing....

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These words are beautiful. Despair is in air or hope.

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Rohan Bendre 11 April 2017

A GREAT POEM IT IS AN EYE OPENER AND A WHISTLE BLOWER I INVITE YOU TO READ MY PLAYS

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Siddartha Montik 03 January 2017

a Wonderful piece... that we all Humans stand and stay at sometime and in such simple lines! thank you for sharing SIR! 10++++! !

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Utter Knownsense 08 June 2016

Do you think this trash you are putting up is poetry! ! There is no rhyme, no reason to your words Grammatically wrong at many places You cut a very sorry figure I would advise you to stop torturing others with this stupid write-ups

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 15 April 2016

Life is worth to live in, forget not but just be in, embrace but not embarrass them, help but not reject them Even at cross road. We May still not adopt, remain at large but not still opt, is the nature so cruel? Kill and get also killed? Even at cross road The two best stanzas delivering a strong message for the awakening of our society.

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Rachel Butler 04 November 2015

Hate is negative good write. Best Sparrow

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Akhtar Jawad 14 April 2015

A meaningful poem., a message for billions who could get rid of uncalled hate, that may burn them alive. Wish they could learn the joys of love and friendship, cooperation and collaboration in fighting the poverty and could jointly work for welfare of humans!

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Patricia Grantham 24 December 2014

We must all come together and meet at the crossroads of life. Then and only then will we become one people. inspiring.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 08 January 2010

'Life is worth to live in, forget not but just be in, embrace but not embarrass them, help but not reject them Even at cross road.' very attracting verse!

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 15 December 2009

Are we at the cross-road..why not meet? hasmukh, we met hundreds of years ago but, our meeting has been eclisped by many of the questions your poem ask...to name a few: Religion teachs and preachs [ i'll add linning pockets instead of helping sooth the lowly; looking the other way when others are being treading upon]; blood thirsty, not sharing, destroying our environment...et al! A poem that speak truth to some universal social issues. thanks for inviting me to read this poem thaT I give a 10+++

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Rajaram Ramachandran 02 December 2009

This is the cry of every honest citizen at the cross today.

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