Tuesday, February 14, 2012

At Creek In The Silver Spangle Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun threw its rays in the day
Touched my nape but neglect to warm the Me.
Dewed it is now that its late
Too many of its ray I tend to feel.
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Korede Abiodun
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Soulful Heart 05 March 2012

That was touching and I liked those last lines that mingles hope and reminiscence together..............beign slave and free is all in the mind and attitude...............keep that smile and every darkness will fly away

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Dave Walker 14 February 2012

A really great poem, like it. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, A Seamless Life Line.

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Korede Abiodun

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Ogun State, Nigeria
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