Through chinks in roman blinds, I wake and see
Its dawn, stretch out my hand for the remote;
Switch off air conditioner, jarring sound
Drowned the musical notes of flitting birds,
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Poetry lies hidden in our daily existence which we take rather casually and for granted. The poet's tender touch raise them to eloquent and lyrical heights! 10! -Raj Nandy
Hi Mamta, you have just created an extraordinary piece out of an ordinary crack of dawn routine...10+++
A picture perfect dawn...to start the day! ! ! Lucky you....i must say! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Madam, Your verse immortalised an ordinary moment in life.
a nice morning, well relished by the poet, . i feel like having a cup of coffee.voted10 surya