Saturday, September 22, 2018

At Beach In Brazil Comments

Rating: 4.5

Sunny summer Sunday in the tropics yippee!
Here Brazil's smell sweetest. Gay's feel brightest
Nature and frolic twist's untamed
Content and delight's well enlaced
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BELLO BIDEMI
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Mahtab Bangalee 28 September 2019

Watch kiddies sand castles make and smile Taffy girls red kite swift and fly Surfers glide waves high and smooth Shore swimmers dive up and low Brisk! Quick! Frisk! In air............///// beautifully written about the nature of a beach and fantasy; congrats for being selected this beautiful poem as POD///

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 September 2019

jamming waves roar hard and loud Lambent sun palms glint and gloss Bracing breeze whistle slow and soft Beach ball kick high and low Brisk! Quick! Frisk! In air. very expressive lines. fantasy and nature described in a wonderful way. tony

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James Mclain 28 September 2019

Sounds like paradise this long white Beach there by the sea. Great poem congratulations on this their pick For poem of the day. James McLain

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 September 2019

Heat of the Summer in Brazil! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Banamala Sen 28 September 2019

Excellent portrayal of a sunny beach in Brazil - every stanza is vibrating with details, as if I am there myself! Congratulations!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 28 September 2019

The panorama at a sea coast in Brazil with enjoying multitude in their own ways and the general atmosphere of comfort and frolic, sun bating ladies, kids engaged in castle building with sand on the beach narrated in captivating style. Congrats on poem of the day.

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Prabir Gayen 28 September 2019

Very fine poem dear poet... congratulation...10++

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Darwin Henry Beuning 28 September 2019

Bello, Very nice poem! Makes one want to travel there! Lovely picture! ! Congrats. I have rated a 10 and added to My Poem List. May your poetry future be bright! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 September 2019

I have come back to give you a 10 for this fascinating poem and MUCH MUCH MORE. KEEP CREATING, DEAR BELLO BIDEM. You love the B............Beach Brazil By Bello Bidem. Brilliantly changed the Cocapacabana predicate. BUT I LIKE THAT NAME VERY MUCH EITHER. GOD´s BLESSINGS, BELLO!

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Bello Bidemi 30 September 2019

Thank you so much for your comments. All the best to you.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 September 2019

Exciting fantasy poem, well told, Bello. CONGRATULATIONS that this poem is chosen FOR THE SECOND TIME. On the same date, different hours, The Member Poem Of The Day, HURRAY! Greatest honour you have got from Poem Hunter here. I congratulate you dear Bello. KEEP WRITING POEMS, PLEASE! Fascinating poem is this!

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Dominic Windram 28 September 2019

Vibrant, joyous rhythmic poem...congratulations!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 September 2018

This is a beautiful poem on nature having touching expression and nice collocation. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Tom Allport 28 September 2018

A colourful poem that gives a taste of a wonderful place? ......penned well Bello

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 September 2018

Bello, Such a marvelous poem of the day......... congrats for being chosen........10++++++++++++++

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