At Bay Comments

like the firefly of the night twinkle...amidst the darkest sky....' at bay ', seems the hover is coming to land. in the heart that crumple the pain of emptiness.... quite a healthful tablet of comfort....every mind refresh the meaning of hope and a goodbye...God bless...my friend...a 10 +++++

A great poem Hasmukh, pleasing rhymes to ears. The sead of love grows big and its branches hug us all. a 10

the seed of love being sown and the hope of spreading it... sir your poem holds the reader.. beautiful rhymes and so was the rhythm.. 10++ certainly.. regards prashant

The sown seed from the poets’ heart… conveyed thoughts that springs apart… watered by them whose considering this art… it will one day succeed to never fall apart. :)

May you truly suceed - when a big tree emerges from the poetic seed! 10! -Raj

exchanging glances strangers in the night a seed is born+++10 regards

i've read and commented on this poem before but i forgot to rate it 10... nice thing that i've done it now!

full of hope...good wishes for the year ahead...

i can't compose words for this coz i dont want fake lines...my words are my soul, my heart and my inner feelings....dear, happy new year to the most poetic poet ever...kissesssss..lavs yaaa... i hear your poetic whispers all over the clouds and river banks am here at the seashore of hopes and wishes that one day after this days...you will come...

Read lips movement even if you murmur May not be that unique feat or achievement excellent meditative poem 10/10

Nice way of telling a dilemma of expressing feelings...10/10!

the last line is quite catchie

You are a gifted writer and poetry flows from your pen so freely and smoothly like a running river. God bless you.

Inability attains may be later if the feelings were ever true.10+

Well composed. Efforts of rhyming made it bright without deviating from plot. Much appreciable work.