Sunday, March 3, 2013

At An Intersection Comments

Rating: 3.5

I stand at intersection and musing
on which road i should go
different paths leads different goals
which one is better i don't know.
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Mohammad Muzzammil
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Charles Darnell 03 March 2013

This poem is about a common dilemma faced by many young people. It is not new. Deciding what to do with one's life amid pressures from family and society and following one's own heart. I like that the poet did not resolve the question in this poem, because I think it would have detracted from the tension he built in his narration. -Charles Darnell

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