Thursday, June 28, 2012

At A Writer's Workshop Comments

Rating: 5.0

The stained dark beige walls stare at me.
They think they know me,
So they start to close in
To get a better look,
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Gabhriel Londe
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Saadat Tahir 10 June 2013

lolzz.... fun a neat and apt potshot at...ummmmm..... i'll just hold my breath @ Kelly Seale giggle you doubled the fun enjoyed :)

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Kelly Seale 29 September 2012

I stand against the cosmic Latte colored wall, my left leg crooked up behind me, holding my stance- Watching, like a chameleon- I blend in with the stains, unnoticed. Bored of all this hum-drum ho-hum, I'm ready to leave this poetic dance- But she catches my eye... She is not like the others- thinking to myself, asking myself why? Gabhriel, I was so take with your write, I placed myself in the room... to see if a difference could be made... You tell me? Graet Ink! Really.; -) -Kelly.

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Kelly Seale 29 September 2012

I stand against the cosmic Latte colored wall, my left leg crooked up behind me, holding my stance- Watching, like a chameleon- I blend in with the stains, unnoticed. Bored of all this hum-drum ho-hum, I'm ready to leave this poetic dance- But she catches my eye... She is not like the others- thinking to myself, asking myself why? Gabhriel, I was so taken with your write, I placed myself in the room... to see if a difference could be made... You tell me? Great Ink! - Really.; -) -Kelly.

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Karen Sinclair 02 July 2012

Wonderful... absolutely so lovely... made me grin a rebellious poet letting her imagination run riot... i love the way you humanised the wall and gave it more personality than the girl next to you... bravo dear lady.. karen

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Gabhriel Londe

Gabhriel Londe

Joplin, Missouri
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