An ordinary morning―
awakening to nothing but daylight
prodding through the eggshell-tinted blinds
and the warm quilts to be tossed back
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A morning brings fresh air, fresh hope for a cheerful day. enjoyed your write.
upon awakening a hot drink seems to be a must to get us going for the day nicely written poem.
A frozen glimps of time in everyones life waking and the delightful coffee shop encounter all wrapped up in a original poem so nice to read...regards
I really enjoyed this poem. Just waking up in the morning is good enough, smelling and tasting fresh coffee makes it even better. A delightful write.
Sheets of oblivion, a wonderful vivid account of that moment of bliss just before you get up. My poem New Day is similar. Very good write.
Beautiful, razor sharp celebration of the glorious minutiae that fill our world. Regards, Don
If only for 'eggshell-tinted blinds' and 'sheets of oblivion', this is a fine work. And it's *not* only that, of course.
In an casual cheerful morning a question what quirks of fate endear us to our choices pulls us towards deeper contemplation. Enjoyed the poem very much.