Sunday, September 19, 2004

At A Sidewalk Cafe Comments

Rating: 4.4

An ordinary morning―
awakening to nothing but daylight
prodding through the eggshell-tinted blinds
and the warm quilts to be tossed back
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Joanne Monte
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Savita Tyagi 03 February 2014

In an casual cheerful morning a question what quirks of fate endear us to our choices pulls us towards deeper contemplation. Enjoyed the poem very much.

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Ramesh Rai 26 September 2013

A morning brings fresh air, fresh hope for a cheerful day. enjoyed your write.

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Heather Wilkins 22 September 2013

upon awakening a hot drink seems to be a must to get us going for the day nicely written poem.

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Ken E Hall 13 May 2013

A frozen glimps of time in everyones life waking and the delightful coffee shop encounter all wrapped up in a original poem so nice to read...regards

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Patricia Grantham 29 April 2013

I really enjoyed this poem. Just waking up in the morning is good enough, smelling and tasting fresh coffee makes it even better. A delightful write.

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David Wood 18 April 2013

Sheets of oblivion, a wonderful vivid account of that moment of bliss just before you get up. My poem New Day is similar. Very good write.

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Don Mcwilliams 01 March 2008

Beautiful, razor sharp celebration of the glorious minutiae that fill our world. Regards, Don

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Max Reif 16 November 2005

If only for 'eggshell-tinted blinds' and 'sheets of oblivion', this is a fine work. And it's *not* only that, of course.

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