Wednesday, December 31, 2014

At A Restaurant Comments

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At a restaurant
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Wending his way through the crowd
And looking for his seat around
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Geetha Jayakumar 03 January 2015

A Beautiful poem with wonderful flow of words. Many such things happens especially on New Years eve. I enjoyed reading the way you portrayed it. I beg your pardon lady sweet For stumbling upon your feet...

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Valsa George 02 January 2015

An interesting anecdote.....! On New Year's Eve, several such scenes take place, as many get intoxicated and lose their sanity! Hilarious!

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Gajanan Mishra 01 January 2015

very beautiful, good writing, thanks.

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Rajesh Thankappan 31 December 2014

I beg your pardon lady sweet For stumbling upon your feet Hilarious! Loved it.

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