At A Loss Comments

A detached life is painful always Always grieve inside aimless Loiter in the yard of losses In search of a past revamp itself! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A detached life is painful since it involves detaching oneself from our innate tendencies. Thoughtful thought indeed.

Some losses shatter the life completely. It's a nice and powerful description of such a loss.

Love is a powerful being, indeed life's soul when that is gone life looks like a fallen leaf drifting here and there to be buried at last.........amazing write.....10

When there comes an irreparable loss, we feel life getting mired and all our enthusiasm dying out! The agony and frustration of life are poignantly brought out! A powerful write Salini!

Each line is meaningful. Exquisite composing. Many thanks dear madam.

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.l.

A detached life is painful always Always grieve inside aimless Loiter in the yard of losses In search of a past revamp itself! ! ! A beautiful nostalgic poem which describes the inner pains.Well expressed well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

Whole poem carved beautifully each stanza is wonderful theme chosen is urgent requirement for the dying world - This drop makes a blot inside Lost past that throb itself A lazy gust lifts somewhere Disastrous plot of life unknown thank you for share