At A Locksmith's Comments

The door of heart can be opened only by the keys of love, sympathy, compassion... Great Write. May have a delightful life. regards

one of my best for its compactness.10 marks

it's simply great! ! ! The idea is new and different. It's short but rich in meaning. Loved the theme. You have shared a great philosophy of life in simple words! ! ! IMPRESSIVE! ! !

excellent question Shahzia, The answer- -no I do not think so,

Very thought provoking and intriguing.

short, straightforward and at the same time offers wealth of meaning...I've read an adage somewhere: 'kind words unlock the iron door'...but some doors are really rusty. A lovely poem!

MashaAllah....Very good!

kia baat hey, nehayat khubsoorat!

OMG! from where you've got the idea! :) lovely!

Very rich concise poem about our human condition. Just the right amount of words and imagery to get the point across.

Very clever. Skillfully written Shahzia. Love it.

we may use a magnetic to draw them if not unlock!

Beauty, passion, innovation, momentum-materials of a woman what lacks a rusted metal locksmith.The virtues are enough to smelt, melt iron hearts when determined otherwise wait coz iron to rusts with the time carbon.

What a lovely way to express disappointment with tact. Read mine - Cicatrix - Adeline

Simply and beautifully composed poem, Shazia! Keepyour ink flowing...

absolutely amazing..ths is the clas of writing whch keep alive my desire to read more..well done..acept my applause

Who has misplaced or lost the key to unlock the iron chamber of heart? What if it is lost for ever, then a key maker can help without breaking the lock

Very good use of logic and very good use of metaphor, an excellent poem, i like it 100%.

one can unlock the door- of iron hearts... The answer is very simp, e dear Shazihia. Love is the master key to open the doors ofiron heart! LOve the lover that love yourself.

one can unlock the door- of iron hearts... The answer is very simp, e dear Shazihia. Love is the master key to open the doors ofiron heart! LOve the lover that love yourself.