Thursday, June 25, 2009

At A Glance Comments

Rating: 5.0

It seem so far away,
The distance of time,
As it gathered into dust,
And became nothing.
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Raul Castelan
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Life cannot be timed...as we have no knowledge as to how much time we have....Living day to day, is not even exact enough...for if we do this, as many do...still so much can be missed that we shouldn't have missed...The mindset of making every moment count, though a bit fantasial...is certainly something to make an effort at doing...This poem is symbolic of time's control over us...I like its tone...Good job Raul...Welcome back onsite! FjR

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