At 8: 40 Pm Comments

A poem that tells a story, almost narrative in context, realistic so it doesnt require more imagery, it rhymes good with the good blend of accented and unaccented syllables, it swayed a rhythm in fact...tone was quite a bit sad and frustrating, the message was successfully conveyed. Oh...that was a blind date! Ain't it? --cynthia

Oscar, I'm reading a wonderful piece of work, I'm sure. -Eila