Saturday, November 8, 2014

Asymptotic Freedom Comments

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We spun, trapped in a pane,
Through stars that we rarely saw
But took for granted
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Brian Minniear
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Brian Minniear 08 November 2014

Thank you for your comment, Bhargabi. This poem is, in fact, rather about living with a costant and proximate reminder of loss that is carried inside oneself. I am glad you enjoyed it.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 08 November 2014

Beautifully presented about loss of freedom in life due to lack of awareness. Excellent work shared on.

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