Frustrated I stood in front
of the God to Pray,
And asked him why lunatics
are increasing day by day.
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“Son! this earth is nothing but asylum of the universe But for marketing my poets described it in beautiful verse...... beautiful write with deep sense of thoughts....10 read mine why do we neglect nataure?
I try every day not to be a lunatic....your excellent poem should help me in this endeavor.
Your writing features a touch of satire, alongside a deep and melancholy awareness of the bad forces around us - loved the read
Not surprising your pain shows in this confession; It has also something to do with your profession. Mankind's story is littered with woes; Do I believe in God? God knows.
Superb poem with a sutle stroke of satire...asylum earth is a lovely truthful title10++++++++
Doctor Doctor please help me do get me a ticket to escape with you all these bankers and brokers blind they keep trying to sell me a credit card mind, the mortgage is paid I'm no longer in debt and the credit card woman just wants me to sweat....lol love your poems...John
Why you have made me don my thinking cap! wow it is a nice way to see this lunatic world.......
food for thought, definitely put the reader in the introspective mode
Dr. Hitesh, I loved this poem. I think 'all our yesterdays have lighted fools', let us hope we grow wiser today. A dialogue with a punch. CP
good narartion..and equally good thought brought down in wonderful words..
Very true portray of so called modern world with political oppression.You have described the factual chronicle of todays world where people have really forgotten the moral values and self evaluate themselves as if they are everthing and never acknowledge others.The poem depicts the contemporary behaviour of self-centeredness and cruelty which has entangled the whole mankind with people getting so furious at times and carve hatred and odium on their hearts.Your state of frustration is so true, yet, this earth could been a heaven had mankind been sincere with God. But the humankind have turned it into an Asylum......10/10.
So true love it.. I love the form of it and all the facts applied great write Krista
haha......asylum.earth sure is one asylum.........great write hitesh.....well penned
Asylum, connected with the earth, i just disappointed a little to did that, then I realised to go through the whole content it is the correct title, bipolar disorder/cyclothymia, is encroched all minds actually the balancing is too disordered, but it cant to be still, surely it will turn to the stable balancing, Sorry for converting the prediction it is a wonderful great work, thank you Dr, Hitesh for the great work,10++
A great conversation with God.. Very powerful message..the logic has set its way..the great revelation has darkened the minds..yet this may help us avoid from getting astray..and through God's will would lead the way back to Him... Amazing concept! Very well narrated!
so don't be wise...for danger is lurking out there! ...better to be a fool...and most happy if named a lunatic! truthful words, Hitesh...well composed...10
Human is the most unpredictable creature on earth.Henceforth events of good and bad will take place.Good job Dr.Hitesh.
Diazepam…clonazepam…resperidone …tricyclic antidepressant et al…are most sought after Rx by docs…its ‘Global-Depression’…God has kept options...hedonism or humanism…we’re to choose… The later group on Divine Crèche...well the former …you’ve explicitly described…thanks Sir for such a contemplative…vibe 10//10 [for humanism] Ms. Nivedita UK