Sunday, January 11, 2009

Asylum Earth Comments

Rating: 5.0

Frustrated I stood in front
of the God to Pray,
And asked him why lunatics
are increasing day by day.
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Dr Hitesh Sheth
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 June 2010

Diazepam…clonazepam…resperidone …tricyclic antidepressant et al…are most sought after Rx by docs…its ‘Global-Depression’…God has kept options...hedonism or humanism…we’re to choose… The later group on Divine Crèche...well the former …you’ve explicitly described…thanks Sir for such a contemplative…vibe 10//10 [for humanism] Ms. Nivedita UK

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“Son! this earth is nothing but asylum of the universe But for marketing my poets described it in beautiful verse...... beautiful write with deep sense of thoughts....10 read mine why do we neglect nataure?

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Richard Dates 02 May 2009

I try every day not to be a lunatic....your excellent poem should help me in this endeavor.

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 11 April 2009

Your writing features a touch of satire, alongside a deep and melancholy awareness of the bad forces around us - loved the read

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Subroto Chatterjee 07 April 2009

Not surprising your pain shows in this confession; It has also something to do with your profession. Mankind's story is littered with woes; Do I believe in God? God knows.

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Indira Renganathan 01 April 2009

Superb poem with a sutle stroke of satire...asylum earth is a lovely truthful title10++++++++

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Wojja Fink 25 March 2009

Doctor Doctor please help me do get me a ticket to escape with you all these bankers and brokers blind they keep trying to sell me a credit card mind, the mortgage is paid I'm no longer in debt and the credit card woman just wants me to sweat....lol love your poems...John

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Malini Kadir 19 January 2009

Why you have made me don my thinking cap! wow it is a nice way to see this lunatic world.......

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Chitra - 19 January 2009

food for thought, definitely put the reader in the introspective mode

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Rani Turton 18 January 2009

This is a truly amazing and wonderful poem, Dr Seth!

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C. P. Sharma 17 January 2009

Dr. Hitesh, I loved this poem. I think 'all our yesterdays have lighted fools', let us hope we grow wiser today. A dialogue with a punch. CP

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Deepti Agarwal 15 January 2009

good narartion..and equally good thought brought down in wonderful words..

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 13 January 2009

Very true portray of so called modern world with political oppression.You have described the factual chronicle of todays world where people have really forgotten the moral values and self evaluate themselves as if they are everthing and never acknowledge others.The poem depicts the contemporary behaviour of self-centeredness and cruelty which has entangled the whole mankind with people getting so furious at times and carve hatred and odium on their hearts.Your state of frustration is so true, yet, this earth could been a heaven had mankind been sincere with God. But the humankind have turned it into an Asylum......10/10.

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So true love it.. I love the form of it and all the facts applied great write Krista

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Reshma Ramesh 12 January 2009

haha......asylum.earth sure is one asylum.........great write hitesh.....well penned

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Vinod Kumar 12 January 2009

Asylum, connected with the earth, i just disappointed a little to did that, then I realised to go through the whole content it is the correct title, bipolar disorder/cyclothymia, is encroched all minds actually the balancing is too disordered, but it cant to be still, surely it will turn to the stable balancing, Sorry for converting the prediction it is a wonderful great work, thank you Dr, Hitesh for the great work,10++

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Min Sia 12 January 2009

A great conversation with God.. Very powerful message..the logic has set its way..the great revelation has darkened the minds..yet this may help us avoid from getting astray..and through God's will would lead the way back to Him... Amazing concept! Very well narrated!

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Indira Babbellapati 12 January 2009

...conversation with god?

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Kesav Easwaran 11 January 2009

so don't be wise...for danger is lurking out there! ...better to be a fool...and most happy if named a lunatic! truthful words, Hitesh...well composed...10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 11 January 2009

Human is the most unpredictable creature on earth.Henceforth events of good and bad will take place.Good job Dr.Hitesh.

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