Thursday, May 12, 2016

Asylum Comments

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They are in the sky, the sky shelter of the stars
Stand down trees, trees, soil protection
Trees, birds, trees, birds, harbor
Fish swim in the water,
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SRIRANJI ARATISANKAR
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2016

Nice one... asylum...10 Asylum You wish to be free again With pain And work for country You left already

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Puspanjali Sahu 26 May 2016

Heart touching..Thank you

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Thank you dear poet. I expect more you on my pages.

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Tom Billsborough 23 May 2016

There are so many protective layers and yet the depression burns from within. You are very imaginative, Sriranji. It is a most intriguing poem. Tom Billsborough

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Thank you my dear poet. I always expect inspiration from you.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 May 2016

Life is like that at times! As we now see refugees heading towards Europe. Thanks for sharing.

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