Sunday, August 23, 2015

Asylum Comments

Rating: 5.0

Endless fighting
Nowhere to turn
Frightening shadows
Food shortages
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David Wood
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Paul Warren 04 September 2015

Why does there need to be the sort of thing? I think now it becomes a contest until someone cracks. We need to help these people. Again we leave it until babies die and hearts are broken. I' m with you.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 August 2015

Nowhere to turn! ! ! With refugees here and there. Great work!

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Roseann Shawiak 23 August 2015

A very intense and vivid picture of the chaos going on, refugees fleeing their own countries, scared, terrified, not knowing from one moment to the next what will happen to them. Their moments of peace quickly disappear when discovering they are not welcome in another country where they had hoped would give them a reprieve from the violence they have left. Extremely well stated situations, I commend you for such an excellent poem depicting the horror of evil. Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn.

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