The wanderers are the planets,
Made of gas and dust and granites.
Mercury is the closest one
To our star which is the sun.
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Great poem, but I thought Pluto had been upgraded to planet status again. I just read that within the last month or so. I could be wrong. I was wrong before. I thought I had made a mistake, and I hadn't! Ha, ha, ha.
This is a cool poem! Great idea to wrte about the universe. How about writing some more? Perhaps you already have - I'll look.
Yes, in fact my first submitted poem was Big Bang Creation. There are several others.