Astral Plane Comments

Some of these sods leave me cold and sweating and others melancholy beyond belief and just occasionally I wake at 5am and think - Yeah! ! I think I understand this one but am wary having seen what others made of my writings!

This is a great poem. I liked very much!

I am not going to try to fix your poem into my own personal scheme of life; whether philosophical, religious, or whatever..but you have a clear voice, and I share some elements of the 'astral' type of experience; I have dreams, visions and voices- the dreams are often, they often come true; the visions much more rare- and they are often in the form of a warning, like some dreams are- but the voices, though extremely rare, are DEAD ON- and though they don't always know the outcome- they force me to focus attention on something I need to, something I don't do well without a stimulus. Love your poems.

so so nice Very few words

wow! it's a great poem..Awesome!

I'm interested in the astral plain as well.Try 'A Dark Fire'... when you feel inclined. Thanks.

I love the yourney from within -one sees so much more in a meditative state.Great write

Wow powerful....very intresting, love to see what else you have...look forward to more.

wow...so fantastic..smiles

It feels like a dreaming, makes me want to experience an astral plane the next time i lay my head.

An experience I can relate to!

Enjoyed this amazing poem very much; the world of dream is a facinating one, in some sense somehow connected to the spiritual. Keep it up!

Well written Dave, great poem.

A good poem about having rushing thoughts in bed

A wonderful poem, , a very good spectrum of imagination you portraited here.thought evoking expression..10

A wonderful poem, , a very good spectrum of imagination you portraited here.thought evoking expression..10

Excellent portrayal of journey........

Very interesting poetry, here. I like this, keep on writing.

Very Cool Dave...It's a happy journey..

The journey will not end...yes not now, i am glad you have it in this stanza 'Then i return to my bed With peace in my head Knowing it's not My journeys end' I feel more freedom in this writing..Must be in great mood always to give birth a passion like this_Unwritten Soul