Friday, June 22, 2007

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Rating: 5.0

A loving kiss for each cheek
On this our rainy night
With an umbrella roof leak
We splash all puddles in sight
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Pasquale DiMeola
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Transcending the medicre to the stellar-wonderful comparision.very good composition and rhyme.a ten fro me.

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Pasquale DiMeola

Pasquale DiMeola

Newark, New Jersey
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