Tuesday, September 5, 2006

Asteroid Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like an asteroid
Appearing unexpected in the sky
You collided with my surface, drilled inside.
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Frank Bana
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Onelia Avelar 15 May 2008

I was first attracted by the title - a wonderful metaphor - like an asteroid from space. A celestial love poem :) brought to the earth like piece of asteroid. Very well penned.10x

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Theresa Moore 05 June 2007

Interesting concept...beautiful expression of awakening love.

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Original Unknown Girl 30 April 2007

Frank, this is absolutely stunning. I love the way you've used the galaxy to describe the collision of two souls. The whole thing resonates so deeply as I believe fate brings people together in a fated way whether we expect or not. This is a love story of the tallest order. I'm adding it to my favs, it's so beautiful. HG: -) xx

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Ruby Root 05 September 2006

Hi Frank, Beautiful Poem excellent title too. I think love poems are my favorite. I will always say that. I guess I love the romance. I think everyone should at least experience love once in their life. Great poem, Take care.

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Tailor Bell 05 September 2006

impactful read no less. great descriptions and structure...all well woven. -Tailor B.

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