Assylum In Abyss Comments

It’s a great poem…cerebrate one…of big heart… Empathy galore Ten++

a poem from the heart with an enigmatic play of wrods and expressions. thoughts sunk deep into your surroundings, finding beauty in the tiniest of creation. creative, great flow and wonderful expressiona nd use of words. great write and a wonderful read! 10++ my friend. Jen

Your style of telling has a telling effect. Yes Sir! This world is beautiful indeed, but not for all............the destitute cannot enjoy the beauty around. How can they? Their struggle with life is life long..... Great piece Sir.

Wonderful display of words.

I interiorize, Consciously hibernate Get struck-awed, flowing Burning lava down spine.' I simply love your expressions sir... Yeah when this kinda thing happens, i go mad too.... I should say, you use the language in most appealing way sir! ! with lovs shan