Asset Within My Soul Comments

The concept and delivery of this verse reads so very well Bonnie - you have captured the essence of romantic poetry here. - - and I love your use of imagery......10 for sure - - from Fay..

true love makes life cherishable with in...good write...explains the importance of love and understanding in married life...10

that was a realy moving poem- thanks for sharing-10

Happy Thanksgiving..this made me fill like half Indian and half Pilgrim.

This must have universal appeal.Beautiful sentiment. Chuck

Bonnie, The caliber of your poetry is definitely shown in this quilled piece... it is of the highest quality prose. Take care, Robert

A very beautiful and deeply touching piece Bonnie. Great write, love Andrew x

An expression of genuine passion & poignancy, rings loud & clarion, in this fine work Poetess Bonnie.So many pennings on the theme of love, and or romance(my own work, NOT excluded) are laced with a wee too much of what i call pre-fab spice...This work of yours, however....smacks of natural sweet...and its srisp, tight structure bleeds of sound poetic principle. Very Nicely Done, young lady! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..