Sunday, April 22, 2018

Assembly Of Saplings Comments

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In a slum area, a school!
I see saplings without uniforms
assembled at the road,
with dreams of a better future
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Khalid Saifullah 25 August 2018

A thoughtful poem, everyone claims ti change the world but changes come after a lot of sacrifices.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 April 2018

The saplings will have to grow as a plant first for springing as colorful flowers in the future........pragmatic expression! i enormously admire the inherent beauty of this poem! (10)

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Loke Kok Yee 23 April 2018

Only knowledge can change the situation, and education is the key to knowledge. The poor are denied knowledge so as to enslave them; with crumbs being thrown to buy their votes. Democracy is a double edged knife. Thank you sir for this powerful write.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 April 2018

A powerful political write. A beautiful satire on elected representatives of the people. Enjoyed reading it.

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