The sounds of home greet me
the trickling sound of the fish tank
my mother's eccentric cackling
and my step father's loud voice
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I also read 'Sweet Apricity' but found no space to type a comment. : ) bri
Interesting. I'm.......I was going to try being funny, but I won't. This is too seriouis. You are lucky if all of your homes are pleasant for you. bri : )
Your poetry is some of the Best! Honest and emotional, straight forward but emotionally illustrative with familiar places and feelings comfortably accommodated by words- really touches my heart
Connecting poem about something we sometimes take for granted yet which ultimately determines our true states of belonging and feeling loved or feeling alienated and ostracized.
Lovely lines loaded with love for home and family. Such a creative and captivating composition that is as refreshing as a river. well done my friend!
A fine poem trying to mesh lives.I liked the warmth of this write.++10 Robert
A great poem, yes, where our absence is not noted, is not my home.
Had to read this gem several times, Nika. Yes, home has a particular sound...How much of what is home, what is familiar makes us feel a certain way because of how those sounds...the particular laugh, the bubbling in the fish tank....make us feel. Perhaps sound is necessary for some sound homes? This one goes on myfavourites list.
Thanks Mj, much appreciated! I think you're onto something there. I think we as humans begin to attach emotions to things (like a certain sound) that hold special meaning for us.
I have several homes/with a number of different families...Brilliant! It's a beautiful poem! Loved reading it! (10)
Thanks so much Dr. Dillip, I'm glad you gleamed some enjoyment from this oldie of mine~.
In every home there is a home, to-day, it demands attention......Nika.......the title of the poem is definitely outstanding and things assembled here to make a sweet home are to be contemplated in all seriousness..... very well scripted......thanks for sharing....10
Home is something I take with me when I leave it's a concrete part of my being in reality, I have several homes with a number of different families, all of which have pieced me together and to this day we're still collaborating Nicely penned poem. 10+++
Home is something I take with me when I leave it's a concrete part of my being in reality, I have several homes with a number of different families, all of which have pieced me together and to this day we're still collaborating working to complete a jumbo puzzle of homes that interlock, meshing together our lives Nicely penned poem. Thanks for the sharing. 10
home sweet home nice one check out my poem sun and planet.
in reality, I have several homes with a number of different families, all of which have pieced me together and to this day we're still collaborating nice poem. enjoyed reading it. 10
Home is where the heart lives..lovely poem.. a ten..
This poem captures the essence of a 'home sweet home.' I am happy to note that this endearing poem has been deservingly chosen as the poem of the day.
Home is something I take with me when I leave it's a concrete part of my being in reality, I have several homes with a number of different families, all of which have pieced me together and to this day we're still collaborating working to complete a jumbo puzzle of homes that interlock, meshing together our lives - - - - - - In reality we have several homes pieced together in our being.A great poem, thanks for sharing.
It is a beautiful poem on home having stunning expression. In this poem the definations of home has been inscribed deeply. Dear Nika, you say, home is quiet, sincere, universal: it's quiet due to family's peace in spite of several storms. Thanks for sharing and congratulation for the poem of the day.
I've returned. It was a nice surprise to receive a PH message from you recently. I'd like to hear more about your 'homes'. bri ;)