Aspiring, Manifesting Comments
He toiled rolling up heavy stones atop the hill
And freed it to fall deep down the valley.
He clapped and laughed as they rolled down
Spectators thought of him to be so insane.
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Very deep indeed! And free-falling! Celebrate not the rise, and mourn not the fall, that is a brilliant line!
Sir this is very true. Those who do are called as insane. Your poem is full of lessons. Aspiring us easy to to make this aspiration reak is the true glory which most of miss. Beautiful sir. Into my favorite
A poem of great depth. A philosophy in life is beautifully depicted in this marvelous poem.
A wonderful poem sir! Admired the way it's drafted...5 stars
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7/21/2025 5:11:20 PM # 1.0.0
A profound poem depicting a life truth with an advice at the end...inspiring....5*****