Tuesday, July 28, 2009

Aspiration Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pleasing as her smile is
Eyes shine evermore
Her hugs tell you a story
She dreams ever more
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Nikunj Sharma
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Andrew mark Wilkinson 05 August 2009

Her every action gets a reaction from you it seems, then again is that not love.. :) 10

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Brishti Mazumdar 03 August 2009

Wow...excellent free flowing thought process....exceleent expression too....10++

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Subroto Chatterjee 03 August 2009

Ah, woman power at last....She rocks.... Cheers. Subroto

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Deborah Cromer 02 August 2009

Such ruling power. Not taking defeat as a word is very strong willed. Aspiration must be Queen? :) DC

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Gitaanjali Naidu 31 July 2009

Not for her the routine, she leads life In her own scheme, she is the point That belittles the extreme these lines are really touching and inspiring. great work

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Lady Grace 29 July 2009

'Pleasing as her smile is Eyes shine evermore Her hugs tell you a story She dreams ever more Can’t take defeat as a word Aims high, flies high a free bird Not for her the routine, she leads life In her own scheme'.....this has one meaning..a good description for the subject.. , ' she is the point That belittles the extreme '...but this is the high light of all lines..the flow is strong and presentable..

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Anjali Sinha 29 July 2009

oh yeh Lady Aspiration is required in ones life without which one cannot rise in life., ofcourse it shoud be accompanied with tremendous amount of hard work. Lovely poem dear Nikunj -10 anjali

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Raj Nandy 29 July 2009

To achieve any goal in life - aspiration and hard work are necessary! 10! -Raj Nandy

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Marieta Maglas 29 July 2009

wonderful poem, lovely to read....10

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Lynda Robson 29 July 2009

What a lady she is! Nothing wrong with aspiration as long as it doesn't take over one's life, well written 10 Lynda xx

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Meggie Gultiano 29 July 2009

well done..a nice piece.

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Sandra Fowler 28 July 2009

What a warm and admiring tribute to a woman who aspires to be the best that she can be. Applause for her. Kind regards, Sandra

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Rakesh Bedi 28 July 2009

Nikunj, i enjoyed it; brilliant!

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Bele Lele 28 July 2009

this is a great poem .a bit short but you said what you had to in thoes lines well done!

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C. P. Sharma 28 July 2009

Aspirations brighten up the life, but we shouln't be unaware of its other side, the despair. CP

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