Pleasing as her smile is
Eyes shine evermore
Her hugs tell you a story
She dreams ever more
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Wow...excellent free flowing thought process....exceleent expression too....10++
Ah, woman power at last....She rocks.... Cheers. Subroto
Such ruling power. Not taking defeat as a word is very strong willed. Aspiration must be Queen? :) DC
Not for her the routine, she leads life In her own scheme, she is the point That belittles the extreme these lines are really touching and inspiring. great work
'Pleasing as her smile is Eyes shine evermore Her hugs tell you a story She dreams ever more Can’t take defeat as a word Aims high, flies high a free bird Not for her the routine, she leads life In her own scheme'.....this has one meaning..a good description for the subject.. , ' she is the point That belittles the extreme '...but this is the high light of all lines..the flow is strong and presentable..
oh yeh Lady Aspiration is required in ones life without which one cannot rise in life., ofcourse it shoud be accompanied with tremendous amount of hard work. Lovely poem dear Nikunj -10 anjali
To achieve any goal in life - aspiration and hard work are necessary! 10! -Raj Nandy
What a lady she is! Nothing wrong with aspiration as long as it doesn't take over one's life, well written 10 Lynda xx
What a warm and admiring tribute to a woman who aspires to be the best that she can be. Applause for her. Kind regards, Sandra
this is a great poem .a bit short but you said what you had to in thoes lines well done!
Aspirations brighten up the life, but we shouln't be unaware of its other side, the despair. CP
Her every action gets a reaction from you it seems, then again is that not love.. :) 10