Tuesday, April 9, 2019

Aspiration Comments

Rating: 4.8

Let's found a human hewn home
beyond world size as our mind
without walls and latch
where none is the owner,
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Anjandev Roy 01 September 2022

......love makes them glow.....brilliant.

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Mwenyeji Spikes 03 September 2019

great poem, i love the imagery

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Yehualashet Teshome 31 August 2019

Oh my God. So beautifully written poem. Thank you

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Uche Nwanze 01 August 2019

Nice poem, inspiring.

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Luz Hanaii 26 July 2019

Beautiful and full of light.

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The poem with beautiful expression.10p

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Rebecca Navarre 29 May 2019

Beautiful thoughts, beautifully sewn! .. Thank you for sharing! ..10S! ..

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Besma Dziri 21 May 2019

A poem that resonates with every beautiful soul, Love is their creed.. peace and harmony " man's eternal aspiration" ! A call for Beauty in a wonderful work of art. Regards.

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Tom Allport 20 May 2019

An inspirational write that is in black and white and for all to share by making life fair.

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Kevin Patrick 09 May 2019

The greatest humanistic aspiration that all of us share a global unity, reading this is aspiring in itself, the words are beautiful and grand my favorite lines have to be inhabit in harmony to mind and heart of differences. inside in appearance different human chandeliers stimulating imagery, that invites so much to think about. Exceptional Yoonoos!

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Suraiya Islam 09 May 2019

Thanks for messaging me to read this beautiful poem.

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Savita Tyagi 02 May 2019

a beautiful dream to aspire and hope for, expressed so beautifully.

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Yasmin Khan 02 May 2019

A utopian dream expressed beautifully, the earth can be such a home for humanity.

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Luke Hobbs 02 May 2019

I really liked the line " on truth grown mead.peace" as it, like the poem leave so much open for imaginative interpretation. There's a lot of symbolism and imagery in this and really challenges the reader to identify themselves in the poem. Isn't that the whole point of writing? I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Well done.

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Aneek Chatterjee 29 April 2019

A great poem of love and harmony

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Mohabeer Beeharry 21 April 2019

Dear Sir, I am glad to be reading your write, we all need peace and some happiness and your poem cries for them. Well done, I like the message in it. Mohabeer Beeharry

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Mary Skarpathiotaki 21 April 2019

Love is the message! ! 10++++++

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Rohma Safi 20 April 2019

Love it. This poem attract me to read again and again

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Kyvin Nash 19 April 2019

Aspirations of real life! Good writ YP

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 April 2019

This poem has special qualities which attract the readers to read over and over again.It is really a great philosophical poem nicely articulated.

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