In this still and perished night
On the stairway to the moon
Stars electric blue
Dazzling our view
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'You and me forever On the stairway to the moon' - The poem ends on such a happy note! Well done, Mary Forrester, the poem resonates!
A great poetic sublimation. You may like to read my ars poetica (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks
~~A very well written and evocative poem. Thank you for sharing.~~
Very nice. Gives me a peaceful feeling. This is your newest poem, and it's almost a month old. Time to write a new one!
It rings in me a memorable honeymoon. Nice work, few but voluminous words!
You and me forever On the stairway to the moon. Love standing strong! Well done, Mary!
...On the stairway to the moon...Amazing line Lovely words. Thank you
"On the stairway to the moon" is very helpful poem