Saturday, January 8, 2022

Aspie Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

My smiles manufactured to make you feel safe
I radiate false amity to lure you as bait
So, when you let me in, I've got a free buffet
Gulping down your pride is as good as Child's play
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Kevin Patrick
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Soran M. H 11 January 2022

How beautiful is the frankness of the poet, writing about small daily details, revealing the secrets of life and relationships between people, in which there is some wisdom, thought and philosophy as well, thank you for this creativity

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Soran M. H 11 January 2022

Everyday I greet the world with programmed cheerfulness But understand it's just a truce of social Armistice

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Soran M. H 11 January 2022

the truth is a noose that will drive you down to nosedive

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 09 January 2022

Your gripping, heartfelt poem well expresses the struggle of many. Thanks for sharing.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 January 2022

What a deeply poignant and touching poem. Yes, sometimes we are in the same boat just to maintain a status quo or for wanting to be accepted. A well expressed and crafted poem

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 January 2022

I feel for you for I am the same way

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