Friday, March 15, 2013

Aspects Of Spring Comments

Rating: 4.9

See the flowers softly blooming
All the trees, new leaves to bear
Nature's beauty thus unfurling
As we breathe the honeyed air
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Valerie Dohren
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Shaun Cronick 16 April 2020

Beautiful. What more is there to say but thank you.

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Heather Wilkins 29 May 2013

A delightful write about spring in all its glory. Your images brings spring alive.

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Sashka Salvatore 27 May 2013

This reminds me of something William Wordsworth would have written.... nature, beauty... haven upon Earth. Lovely poem :)

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Shahzia Batool 04 April 2013

Reminded me of indira b's spring haikus....its lovely...

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Ken E Hall 28 March 2013

Yellow chicks and eggs of chocolate wonderful line for Easter...natures beauty in this poem a pleasure to read and read again. I luv chocolate and this poem! ...regards

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Mary Forrester 27 March 2013

How lovely Valerie.

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Juan Olivarez 27 March 2013

Welcome springtime. Lovely poem.

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Paul Brookes 27 March 2013

Beautiful................a shame we're still stuck in Winter Iook forward to your described Spring with much antisipation. BB : O)

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Unwritten Soul 25 March 2013

It really refreshing just like spring...i hear the river flows and green curling up from the ground..so nice! ! ! _Soul

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Hazel Durham 22 March 2013

The sheer joy and beauty of the arrival of spring in all it's glory is written in spellbinding style! Brilliant write!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 21 March 2013

My heart is bouncing with happiness to read your wonderful poem on the Aspects of Spring.An impeccable lovely write with rhyme and rhythm which captures the heart. GREAT, VALERIE! !

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Meena Mustafa 20 March 2013

My hats off to you for a brilliant write :) It's better than the one written on Daffodills by Williams W. :)

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Kelvin Owusu 19 March 2013

a lovely poem, very enjoyably piece

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 17 March 2013

When I vote my 10 my comment disappeared. sooo here goes again...a most enjoyable verse. Thank you for the invitation to read. Thank you for sharing. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing (I invite you to read my Ode To Eloise)

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Your portrait of Spring is as beautiful that of Summer, Valerie. Lt the birth of the season not be just an onset of it... A powerful write.

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Frank James Davis 16 March 2013

A lovely offering, Valerie!

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Dave Walker 15 March 2013

A beautiful poem, lets hope we get some great weather this year.

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