Thursday, December 8, 2016

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Rating: 4.3

My dream floats in the wind
Beating your frosty lips as you
Go on doing the moon bath;
My breathe loves you to the
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Rose Kanana 21 December 2016

This sounded very musical, the creativity in use of symbolism was rich-bringing out love and beauty together.

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 December 2016

Honored...Thanks very much.

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Annette Aitken 08 December 2016

A lovely poem..but.. I have to ask...what does Go on doing the moon bath; ? ? mean. it sounds lovely I would just like to know its meaning :)

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 December 2016

She is getting washed by moon beam when she comes to stroll out side. And for reading and comment. Much love.

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Annette Aitken 18 December 2016

ah yes that makes sence now thank you for that.. :)

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