Thursday, January 8, 2009

Asmaradana (Love Song) Comments

Rating: 5.0

(dedicated to Ms. Marielle Labeque, a gifted pianist)

Gegaraning wong akrami
Dudu bandha dudu rupa
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Mimi Fakhira 24 February 2009

Hey, there's a song in Malaysia with the exact title and some of the Java lines! Maybe they adopted it from the Java language. Beautiful! Full of love and quality.. you are a versatile and experienced poet. Bop to the top, bro!

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Gargi Saha 22 January 2009

A lovely poem........

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Antonio Liao 20 January 2009

even angels sing this love song....it tells and talk about what is life...in the purest soul in our heart...not just only a gift to live in this world....but life of life itself...a precious one a gems in heaven...such an immortal song made in a poem...your great my friend..God bless and thank you for the poem shared

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Ruerd Visser 19 January 2009

It such a joy to read your native tong, makes me consider to start writing in frisian as wel, even when that takes something more since i only speak it. gie sa troch sizze wy dan. wel worth reading my friend. and like the iris say a thousandfold thanks. The Boomfriend

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The greatest things in life are free yet money is important and necessary. Keep writing.

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Juan Carlos Abeti 19 January 2009

interesting the way you combined

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i love your style. you have perfected it

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 18 January 2009

a very thoughful piece....i could'nt make anything out of the other script...

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Bob Blackwell 18 January 2009

If the world lived on love, the need for jewels and fancy things would be small, as we would be too busy looking after each other. Right thoughts good writing.

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C T Heart 17 January 2009

A poem of two languages...unique style of writing....Thanks for sharing this lovely poem....

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Seema Aarella 17 January 2009

A very meaningful poem, a different feel...thanks for sharing!

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Very different and nice KRISTA

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Ershad Mazumder 16 January 2009

Very good poem.Thanks dear Siddiqui

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Carol Rhodes 16 January 2009

What a beautiful title. Love the way it rolls off the tongue. Poetic and caressing, yes? Ahmad, as always, a true delight to share in your thoughts and skillful condensing of what is essential to life. Thank you! Carol

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Jagannath rao Adukuri 16 January 2009

'dudu bandha dudu rupa' sounds beautiful! Does bandha mean bond and rupa mean beauty as they do in Sanskrit?

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Fiona Davidson 15 January 2009

Beautiful words...thank you for sharing it...

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Meggie Gultiano 12 January 2009

beautiful verse..oh, if only i can hear you sing it for me..

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Lynda Robson 12 January 2009

Full of meaning, well done, Lynda xx

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Mehmet YILMAZLAR 11 January 2009

i wanna to know indenosian language to write my whole comment

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Sabrina Jubahar 11 January 2009

simple yet meaningful. awesome!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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