Friday, January 3, 2003

Asleep Comments

Rating: 3.2

Under his helmet, up against his pack,
After so many days of work and waking,
Sleep took him by the brow and laid him back.
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Wilfred Owen
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R. H. Peat 29 July 2022

Wilfred too the long sleep himself and never came home. He came home for a while but was sent back into battle and died there near the end of the WWI.

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Sir Bobby Charlton 06 March 2020

Well I'm falling 'asleep' reading this

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Tim Jamie Dim 06 March 2020

Well I'm falling 'asleep'

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ben tennyson 26 June 2019

me this is good(Owen's on fire 'sing it')

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matthew lee 12 February 2019

I take wickets for fun

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Edward Faulkner 12 February 2019

this was a ripper of a poem thanks Will

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Lena Jackson 10 January 2019

I love this poem I am 11years old

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pushpadewa 22 December 2018

The poem grew love of motherland this is a nice poem

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Jayden 19 October 2018

I think it’s a really nice poem I’m also only 11

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big shaq 02 January 2018

its dreadful listen to mans not hot! ! ! big shaq

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Emma Barnsley 16 May 2016

I love this poem even though i am a kid only 11. Love Wilfred Owen especially Dulce et decorem est

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 09 September 2014

The hardships meted out a soldier and finally sleeps a wonderful imagination and eye opening against the war and loss thereafter.Also a symbolic poem with such meanings.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 09 September 2014

In this poem one thing to be noted..work continuously to earn and take care of his family..it is responsibility envisaged to us..We are responsible....Second part - tired we sleep- -slumber or death more we tired more we feel sleepy..Age is a weight like thing we are tired to carry and sleep for ever...helmet is symbolized as safety..yet when night comes we fall asleep nice one

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Dawn Fuzan 27 April 2014

I like this one, its Good

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Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair 22 September 2013

So many of such innocent ones Laid their heads on snow and grass Marking their fall by streaks of red In every war that extracted its toll in human blood

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Manohar Bhatia 09 September 2013

This is an excellent poem on sleep & work. Man slogs throughout his life to maintain his family, parents and others dfependent on him.At the end of the day, he becomes dog tired and sleeps under his helmet, just as a shouldier.Sometimes, the man or the military man may be dead, exhausting his time on this earth. Manohar Bhatia.

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Muzaffer Akin 09 September 2013

Excellent a poem.Congratulations.

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Ramesh T A 09 September 2011

Life of hard working men ends so finally which is well said by Wilfred Owen in a simple way! He works ever and sleeps finally! But others never sleep and one day wake to see to say alas for his loss! This is the world life we should know! Wonderful poem!

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Pranab K Chakraborty 09 September 2011

He sleeps. He sleeps less tremulous, less cold, Than we who wake, and waking say Alas! ..... MUCH FOR OUR HELPLESSNESS. Great work.

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Michael Harmon 09 September 2009

Wilfred Owen, along with Siegfried Sassoon and Rupert Brooke, is one of the great poetic chroniclers of WW1. His work (e.g. with slant rhymes, etc) was innovative, and worthy of study today. His death, and Keats', at a tragically early age, I consider to be among the greatest losses English poetry has ever suffered.

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