Asleep While Living Comments

very encouraging and narratively ecstasy

So long hidden Come to life and erupt Finally joining with nature Becoming true to themselves.............utterly persuasive longing for a life touching the own song, excellent flow feeling by desire of luscious glow lucked in nature, ingeniously curved over the beauty intoned,10+++, thanks for sharing

a superb write ma'am with so much depths, bravo thanks 10+++++++++ rgds asif

This is awesome. Are you really 8? If you are then it is not only awesome but amazing. Great write! 10+

The awakening........of you from boredom..like a sleepless night.you're freshened from the touches of the special one.......you're longing for. I luv this piece Carol.Its superbly written.A + and 10+.