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your creativity shows itself in this brilliantly written poem

Hi! I’m Eddie Roa and I just got in to this website. By chance I came across your name in the list of poets and read some of your works. Your poem takes a bit of time to digest. A bit Dadaist I think. Intriguing at the least. I have posted some of my poems today and a few days ago.. My style ranges from light to dark poetry (modern enough but not postmodern) and some Japanese verse forms like haiku, senryu and tanka. I hope you will bother to check out my work. Thanks and happy writing.

Pretty obtuse, Ryan. I can't penetrate the meaning. Maybe I'm just dense. I think you wrote the poem for yourself. However, if you want other people to connect with it, you'll have to modify your internal language and give a few more hints about what you're talkinga about. Of course, that would essentially involve compromise, something you may not want to do.

it will take some reading to understand this.