Sunday, September 30, 2018

Asleep At The Wheel Comments

Rating: 4.9

Asleep at the wheel
Of life
Literally
Figuratively
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Gio Masserati
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UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon 22 September 2022

Loved this emotional outburst, rather poetic. Sure, it feels poignant, bordering melancholy.

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Richard Wlodarski 26 August 2022

Just like every one is worthy of a faithful monogamous relationship, this inspirational poem is truly worthy of rceiving the honour of POD. Congratulations, Gio!

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Sandra Feldman 26 August 2022

Very sad but bravely, GREAT!

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Lyn Paul 31 December 2019

You can feel your every word, heartache and exhaustion. When you just accept you have had enough and are strong enough to move forward. Here's to an amazing new year.

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Chinedu Dike 31 December 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful poem written from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Gio. Happy new year.

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Rajnish Manga 31 December 2019

A deeply philosophical poem about the interplay of divine relationships. Thanks and Congrats.

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Mahtab Bangalee 31 December 2019

Love's time has died The record is scratched Beyond repair Time for a new director Spin me anyway But not in circles ..........//// beautiful poem penned, beautiful poetic expression; congrats for being selected this as POD

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A beautiful poem so honest and clear in thought. You Will find me now Asleep at the wheel So touching and emotional......A full score....10

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Amir Marandi 31 December 2018

Agonies of life's cruelties leading to a hopeless path. Giving up. Envisioning reaching freedom by seeking the truth. A sophisticated poem.10+++++. Congratulation being selected as POD.

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Sandra Feldman 31 December 2018

Life belongs to those Who can take it, And still do the right thing Judging by the quality, Frankness and stamina In this extraordinary poem, You seem to be one of those heroes, For whom someday Heaven will sing. Your style, new, bold and brave but sincere and clear.. Reminds me of Scarlet O'Hara, ' I'm going to survive' 'tomorrow I will deal Sad perfection in this poem but it's sad perfection is unforgettable. A work of poetic art to complete our poetic year.

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The Muse 31 December 2018

Your poem has touched me to the core Gio. Well done.

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Godfrey Morris 31 December 2018

Very Dramatic. Feelings vividly conveyed. Awesome write

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 December 2018

Gio, a well penned poem of the day. Congrats for being chosen........

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Prabir Gayen 31 December 2018

Very good poem dear poetess....tha tha

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M Asim Nehal 31 December 2018

Excellent poem, congrats for the honours POTD.

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Pasquale DiMeola 31 December 2018

Wake up and put your shoulders to the wheel. You might be surprised where your traveling brings you.

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Gio Masserati 31 December 2018

Thank you, Pasquale, I will do so, continually. Gio

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 December 2018

Tiredness! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Gio Masserati 31 December 2018

Thank you, Edward. Sleep saying, your welcome! Gio

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Mahtab Bangalee 31 December 2018

beautiful poem on love /// wheel of life started going on going on going on midway broken down! pieces of glass scattered strong mind stayed a while observed observed observed decided to turn on another speed wheel started on another pace another world another peace another drowsiness another pleasing another sleeping

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Gio Masserati 31 December 2018

Thank you, Mahtab! Nice addition. Gio

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