Asleep at the wheel
Of life
Literally
Figuratively
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Just like every one is worthy of a faithful monogamous relationship, this inspirational poem is truly worthy of rceiving the honour of POD. Congratulations, Gio!
You can feel your every word, heartache and exhaustion. When you just accept you have had enough and are strong enough to move forward. Here's to an amazing new year.
Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful poem written from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Gio. Happy new year.
A deeply philosophical poem about the interplay of divine relationships. Thanks and Congrats.
Love's time has died The record is scratched Beyond repair Time for a new director Spin me anyway But not in circles ..........//// beautiful poem penned, beautiful poetic expression; congrats for being selected this as POD
A beautiful poem so honest and clear in thought. You Will find me now Asleep at the wheel So touching and emotional......A full score....10
Agonies of life's cruelties leading to a hopeless path. Giving up. Envisioning reaching freedom by seeking the truth. A sophisticated poem.10+++++. Congratulation being selected as POD.
Life belongs to those Who can take it, And still do the right thing Judging by the quality, Frankness and stamina In this extraordinary poem, You seem to be one of those heroes, For whom someday Heaven will sing. Your style, new, bold and brave but sincere and clear.. Reminds me of Scarlet O'Hara, ' I'm going to survive' 'tomorrow I will deal Sad perfection in this poem but it's sad perfection is unforgettable. A work of poetic art to complete our poetic year.
Gio, a well penned poem of the day. Congrats for being chosen........
Wake up and put your shoulders to the wheel. You might be surprised where your traveling brings you.
beautiful poem on love /// wheel of life started going on going on going on midway broken down! pieces of glass scattered strong mind stayed a while observed observed observed decided to turn on another speed wheel started on another pace another world another peace another drowsiness another pleasing another sleeping
Loved this emotional outburst, rather poetic. Sure, it feels poignant, bordering melancholy.