Wednesday, June 22, 2011

Asleep Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the road this morning
I saw two lambs lying side by side
they were fast asleep
or rather,
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Chinwe Robert
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 22 June 2011

Great poem. Written well with vivid imagery. Nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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