Asking You To Stay Comments

a good write with an interesting form.

really explains the condition well..managed to capture the powerful feelings of your heart the condition of an aching heart....lovely

Leaning over the edge, but keeping my feet on solid ground. Wanting to leap into your ocean below, but i protect myself from being a casualty- frightened to drown. Afraid to slip, but wanting to slowly float away. Practicing for the ache as you drift further and further from my waiting heart. Those are my favorite lines. You've managed to capture the feeling of being painfully cautious quite well. Also: practicing for the ache as you drift...that line is a great illustration of such a common human tendency. Thanks for shaing.

Wow another really good write! I could actually feel the ache in my chest as I read this. I know what it's like to want to tell somone to stay but be to afraid to say it.