Thursday, September 10, 2009

Asking Comments

Rating: 3.0

Yet again, a wanderer at your shore.

Asking and not waiting for your reply.
Waiting but not wanting; watching but silently.
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Rani Turton
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Sue S. 28 September 2009

This is a fabulous poem

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Liz Thaugally 21 September 2009

Poignant wistful and simply legantly written pecae on how the human emotions can be hidden deep within our Silent exteriors,10/10

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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009

Elegance and rhetoric Once when you took over my imagination Rachel Ann Butler

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C. P. Sharma 14 September 2009

Strange is the state of mind Moves away but intertwined. CP

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Fay Slimm 11 September 2009

The need for questions answered is highlighted here Rani. along with the insistence an old love makes upon us - - bringing even the 'rocks to tears' is an inspired thought..... thank you - this is a wistful but beautiful verse.... Fay 10 + + +

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