Tuesday, July 31, 2018

Ask The Sky Why Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the vault of thesky a mystery
Thunderbolts and lightnings play
To pour
In the vault of my mind a mystery
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Indira Renganathan
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Varsha M 10 August 2021

Yes ma'am we all have a rumbling mind and an aching heart just like the wailing clouds pour out. Well penned.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 August 2018

Highly imaginative poem nicely executed. I appreciate this poem.10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 July 2018

Such a well crafted poem, Indira...10+++

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Mahtab Bangalee 31 July 2018

interesting poem and nicely penned- To bang For me it's the painful killing or Killing pain Ask the sky Has it any pain as the clouds play To hit thundering -enjoyed it

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 July 2018

For me it's the painful killing or/Killing pain/Ask the sky/Has it any pain as the clouds play To hit thundering....a thought-provoking write! Thanks dear madam for sharing.....10

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