Monday, March 16, 2009

Ask Of Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

You don't have to ask of me,
You need not say a word,
Whilst holding you so tenderly
Your thoughts I clearly heard,
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Laurie hill
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beautiful poetry. me loves it...... and i agree with Ivor.

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Ivor Hogg 07 August 2009

words are a poor form of communication but you use them well

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Smiley Hooker 04 July 2009

Sensual and artistic! Written with passion and excellent creativity. Beautiful! : -)

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Ruth Walters 13 April 2009

Sauce and tenderness.....what a mix: -)))))

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Samweli Butobi 23 March 2009

very goog poem keep writing body language tells something in what to do always.

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Susan Bagley 19 March 2009

Gulp! Well, Umm, goose bumps, Geez, Laurie why do you do this? ? ? I am about to faint. I didn't need this you know. I am single and have not been on a date in a year.God, what are you up too? Susan

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Pablo Cruise 19 March 2009

Such a sensous poem, delivered with such tenderness. Lovely, Laurie.

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