Friday, May 12, 2006

Ask Myself Why? Comments

Rating: 4.5

As i looked into your eyes
I could see the fire no longer there
It seemed to me that you
No longer wanted to care
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Brittany Marsh
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Dennisa Davidson 02 April 2008

Brittany, this is the saddest truth many young girls know only when its too late! I wish those who need to know will read your poem and know before the time comes to sit on the bed and cry and only be able to ask why...

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Kathryn Allen 18 September 2006

='[ this poem seriously almost made me cry. i really can relate to that type of emotion and heartbreak, it's killer sometimes. probably the worst emotion in the world. and the worst pain. heartbreak i think is stronger than death.

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Brittany Marsh

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