Monday, March 24, 2008

Ask Me Tomorrow Comments

Rating: 4.8

i wanted to write you a poem
ode to the best time of my life
but
i forgot the words, my thousand descriptions of you
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barbara williams
ode
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 17 December 2008

A beautiful poem. Simply and spontaneously written, yet not worded. Some poems are wordless, some are between or behind the lines. I wonder which one you want to write for him. May the Poem asks you every tomorrow!

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Ron Flowers 11 August 2008

An excellent poem. I give it a 10. Ron

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No need to try again tomorrow, Barbara...if this guy doesen't get the message, after reading this, ....don't think he ever will! Excellent Work, young lady! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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