Ask Me Again Comments

after all when lovers converge the sun turns into an ocean Is the best part of this poem, I love this - Ask me again, a lovely start and a romantic end. NIce to read...

After enjoying the poem I wondered to myself - could it have been written any better? 10

Hi Emu - This is revelationary - I love it. Scores a ten for structure (dynamic) contents (awesome) and impact (immediate) it is all a Good Poem should be. Line 3 is all about the sense of touch - it is so intoxicating - and so so important in a real loving relationship - TOUCH ME AGAIN. Line 5 The importance of words - that is why POETRY is such a Global Force - ASK ME AGAIN. Lines 678 The power of place - nostalgia - deja vu (disambiguation) - TAKE ME BACK TO THERE AGAIN. The ending is infinite. 'I say ask me again my mirage - after all when lovers converge - the Sun turns into an Ocean - AWESOME. Your last line is a beautiful poem - well done Emu thanks for sharing. Love you lots in Poetry - JOHN.

a very tender poem Emu, I enjoyed reading it........ Ruth

what a poetic title and romantic way written poem..liked it 10/10

you are but silence wrapped in the arms of his charm, it extends from the words in my mouth, around it's slowly, with my face with lt' s interior of its eyes...iip

Wow, what a well penned poem, true feelings coming out from the bottom of the heart not from barren lips...Keep it up, you got the talent...10+++

wow that was really seductive... yeah, i agree with Black Bird

wow amazing =] my mind kept thinking of love, as in like a first love type of thing then it suddenly changed to a well maybe the character is more of a mistress? Anyway I loved it