No man would hesitate to lay down live?
If he really thinks of motherland and believes
What else can be holier than earth?
Everything else can be secondary even the death
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It' a very good poem with a defined depth to it. I enjoy the underline criticism of so called holy war you have embedded in your poem. How one has a duty to survive, not for him self, but for his loved ones, as even if they do go heaven for the holy war, it is the ones they leave behind to carry the burden who suffer.
A person does themselves a favor to lean back and clear the mind and read this very deeply considerate work. It is far from merely surface consideration for it wants the whole picture revealed. A very worthy piece of work for mankind to reflect upon for the good of everyone.... Thank you for sharing your beautiful spiritual unbilical cord.............. Jim Troy
I love this poem, it's a great emotion for whole people..but i will love God first as He sent a mother to care me with love and gentle smiles...and He will listen every prayer i make for mother so He cares to make us eternally happy (mom and children) _Unwritten Soul
I would salute to mother first The pray to God last Even almighty owe their place in her womb We all do a curse on her by destroying her dreams with bombs
very good poem... well written, thought provoking... the Mother image very strong, in her we see the human hands and heart of God unfolding... and the sadness of war... there are no holy wars. like this poem very much!